Friday, December 31, 2010

list poem

Unlovables

There are certain seats on airplanes
that can’t arouse affection, several metropoles
of the Midwest impossible to warm up to.

Some people can’t be loved, whole groups of them,
such as mall-trawlers, teenaged and petulant.
You draw an arc around them.

Date-riddled fruitcake. Tin cans
and tap water earn no one’s ardor.

There’s that table near the restrooms
at Mauro’s Trattoria
that you don’t want to sit at, ever.

Some creatures are better left unloved,
like the black rat snake of Canada.

In some cases, you long to love:
a feted painting, for example,

or the nice man who adores
your every pore, whom
your mother loves
but you like less
and less.

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7 comments:

caroleesherwood said...

sarahjane -- i love this!! "like the black rat snake" and "you like less and less."

djvorreyer said...

Great piece - I love the arc you draw around the mall-trawlers. And the ending is perfect.

Elizabeth said...

Really like your poem and heartily agree with all of it, but those last few lines are priceless.

Elizabeth

liv2write2day said...

This is soooo good. I could related to just about all of it. And the ending was so true.

Erin Davis said...

Fantastic. I love the line about drawing an arc around the mall trawlers, and the last lines really bring it home!

Laurie Kolp said...

Beautiful poem... I especially like the endingQ

SarahJane said...

thanks for reading - fun prompt this one

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