tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37651263.post1314463748333388869..comments2013-08-07T19:57:20.728-07:00Comments on blue hookah: rwp prompt: s*x in strange contexxxtsSarahJanehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02497062670296130228noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37651263.post-8262729997203869222009-12-14T07:05:11.895-08:002009-12-14T07:05:11.895-08:00I really enjoyed this! Sometimes the best thought...I really enjoyed this! Sometimes the best thoughts can be conveyed it a small space...great!Cynthia Shorthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12386358503730817278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37651263.post-77824620195077141452009-12-11T08:10:21.811-08:002009-12-11T08:10:21.811-08:00not doing the math can get you in trouble--you can...not doing the math can get you in trouble--you can wind up getting a bit too fat and round.<br />I like the little piggies here. There is something almost infantile about sex. Fingers as snouts is very evocative.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07490035808297516510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37651263.post-42938105471679578152009-12-11T05:12:06.064-08:002009-12-11T05:12:06.064-08:00No maths is required while s*x!
nature copulatesNo maths is required while s*x!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2009/12/nature-copulates.html" rel="nofollow">nature copulates</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37651263.post-25766565000714046882009-12-11T02:50:58.342-08:002009-12-11T02:50:58.342-08:00how nice to have readers!
thanks for the comments....how nice to have readers!<br />thanks for the comments. this was a fun one.SarahJanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02497062670296130228noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37651263.post-236085423030618712009-12-10T18:54:20.358-08:002009-12-10T18:54:20.358-08:00I love the way your poem blends child like images ...I love the way your poem blends child like images (fingers, toes and piggies) through an adult theme. Nicely put together, SarahJane!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03241402645242821612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37651263.post-60373189989929325842009-12-10T17:20:21.394-08:002009-12-10T17:20:21.394-08:00It's sweet..groping piggy fingers and all:)It's sweet..groping piggy fingers and all:)rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37651263.post-4938285425236245912009-12-10T17:11:32.149-08:002009-12-10T17:11:32.149-08:00It's a poem that has soared with metaphors. Re...It's a poem that has soared with metaphors. Really like it.Irenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12918979903066830662noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37651263.post-30263093093191864262009-12-10T13:49:45.913-08:002009-12-10T13:49:45.913-08:00I like how you personify lust as a "dumb slut...I like how you personify lust as a "dumb slut" and how it multiplies in a way that mirrors the impact of sex on those lust affects. I also like the pig-metaphor used here ambivalently, not just pejoratively.Davidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18068981222709414746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37651263.post-14828878391199943052009-12-10T12:53:24.095-08:002009-12-10T12:53:24.095-08:00I really love this short poem and where you take i...I really love this short poem and where you take it - very original voice!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37651263.post-65287242316938819382009-12-10T11:06:29.194-08:002009-12-10T11:06:29.194-08:00nicely done Sarah...and the right way...is there ...nicely done Sarah...and the right way...is there any other way...thanks for sharing thisWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.com